The next book was going to be where the characters were in an Awareness, of Time...I mean time-travelling.
Like time it was going to go backwards sometimes, touching on events in this book (gravity-grey) (download for free on google drive, this link highlighted);
that happen differently, because the camera has moved now, from one place in the mind to another, or,
just watching the character, moving from the corner to the wall to the air...it could become more of a romance, it could go back to a time before the events of this first book. Still, experimental...I don't want to tell the plot, and a synopsis is bad for the plot, because I've gone slightly simple in my mind, it's difficult when you are juggling words that form poems down to the instinct of emotion, that I've found it difficult to be logic in normal or formal ways of writing and speaking...so these blog-posts are really spontaneous, where is my mind? some explanation...
the synopsis would look much the same as any synopsis, except that it wouldn't quite be as the Book, and it would never explain the way the book does, and there are so many secrets inside that introducing characters would make the plot flop...if you like "avant-garde" mixed with "sci-fi" or you like girls and boys...or reading about Britain on the edge of the city, would be something new and strange, and fantastical..
Blah, it's none of those...some scenes are weak because I don't understand the British, i would agree they are caricatures, badly done, classicist, racist, Marxist, conservative, ----delete here----
Like time it was going to go backwards sometimes, touching on events in this book (gravity-grey) (download for free on google drive, this link highlighted);
that happen differently, because the camera has moved now, from one place in the mind to another, or,
just watching the character, moving from the corner to the wall to the air...it could become more of a romance, it could go back to a time before the events of this first book. Still, experimental...I don't want to tell the plot, and a synopsis is bad for the plot, because I've gone slightly simple in my mind, it's difficult when you are juggling words that form poems down to the instinct of emotion, that I've found it difficult to be logic in normal or formal ways of writing and speaking...so these blog-posts are really spontaneous, where is my mind? some explanation...
the synopsis would look much the same as any synopsis, except that it wouldn't quite be as the Book, and it would never explain the way the book does, and there are so many secrets inside that introducing characters would make the plot flop...if you like "avant-garde" mixed with "sci-fi" or you like girls and boys...or reading about Britain on the edge of the city, would be something new and strange, and fantastical..
Blah, it's none of those...some scenes are weak because I don't understand the British, i would agree they are caricatures, badly done, classicist, racist, Marxist, conservative, ----delete here----